Bill Gates is the person who I respect the most. He is successful in his career because of his persistence and hard-working. Born in a rich family and having a sister who is older than him, Gates had lived in a good environment. His parents are strict while at the same time respect them. Gates has a gift especially for math. Moreover, he has fallen in love with computer since he got in touch with it for the first time at the age of thirteen. Therefore, studying and digging into things related to computer system has been his lifelong interest.
He quit Harvard University without graduating and then created Microsoft with his friend. Never did them think that the company will be so successful and brilliant in the future. As we know, nowadays, almost every computer is equipped with the software of Microsoft. For instance, the Word, Power Point, Excel, and so on are really helpful for not only adults but teenagers. To be frank, people can’t live without the software created by the Microsoft, especially those who work in the office; they use this software every day.
However, when a person becomes successful, there may be something difficult waiting for the person. It goes without saying that in the process to success, Bill Gates was faced with a lot of obstacles. For example, some software entrepreneur tried all they can to find out some reasons to defeat Gates. To be frank, Gates was confused and helpless at that time. Nevertheless, he took the challenge and keeps moving forward to ride out the difficulty. It is his effort and persistence that Microsoft can keep striving.
There are many reasons result in his success. For instance, he spends a lot of time to communicate with others, trying to express his concepts to others clearly. He says that the biggest challenge is to find the best people and organize them, doing the best thing for the society and for people worldwide.
He is crazy about his job. In other words, he loves his job and he enjoys working. Others think that it’s too bitter for him to work all the time; however, he is happy to be busy. Gates says that he wants to be a person who will not regret for his goal and dream and that he will devote all his life in working. What attract me the most is that he doesn’t care about how much money he makes. On the contrary, he cares that whether he would be too old to come up with creative ideas.
Although he makes a great deal of money, he isn’t selfish at all. Unlike many successful people, Gates is devoted to charities all over the world, helping people who are suffered and live in a bad environment. I respect him from the bottom of my heart. He is an ideal model for me to learn something from. His perseverance, hard-working, creativity, and benevolence are what I lack and what I have to learn.
Wow!You really give us a lot of information about Bill Gates from his childhood, studying process to the way he became successful. I think he is a brilliant model for us to follow and some of his perspective are valuable and worth contemplating.I like your structure and how you put his life story in a vivid way, especially you quoted some of his sayings in the writing, which made it more reliable.
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